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title: 4/5
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It was a good decision, however, I think that it tells too much about what happens in the story, like they are fated, but you could've said something different because they(readers) aren't supposed to know that they are fated yet.
foreword and description: 6/10
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It was okay, and it met necessary requirements, but you could always try taking some time and fixing grammar and spelling mistakes and the highlight for the text. Or just pretty-it-up and fix it in general.
appearance: 5/5
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It looks good and easy to read with the medium font that AFF allotted for you. It's very clean which I really love and it is simple. You didn't add too much layout to your text and it looks absolutely fine.
plot: 13/15
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Interesting plot, I thought I'd never see a Taeffiny fic ever, actually. It's interesting and it keeps its promise, while entertaining the reader. Though I do think that the plot seems a bit rough? Or perhaps slow because there wasn't a lot to tell in the beginning?
originality: 13/15
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I have read of other stories similar to this one that isn't a Taeffiny fic and this is used more often than you think. I think the point that everything is revolving around work makes it really different. Good job.
grammar and spelling: 14/20
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It was okay, it wasn't the best I've ever seen though. You should use more words and sentence fluency, use something more descriptive for the words to keep the readers entertained. And the use of someone speaking should be used as quotation mark speak speak speak comma then quotation mark instead of using periods before the quotation marks instead. And you don't use 'arh' because that is getting really really annoying when it's really 'ah' and try not to use it that often, because this is clearly not a Korean typed fiction. So, keep working harder so the readers can enjoy it too.
flow: 9/10
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A bit slower than I thought, but still right paced.
characterization: 8/10
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It was clear and the characters keep true to their words. Their chart matched their personality okay.
overall enjoyment: 7/10
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It was interesting, but I, unfortunately, don't really pair Tiffany and Taecyeon together. It was great and satisfying. Good job, though! I actually enjoyed it. Thanks for coming here for your review. I hope I did well(and don't take too much of it to heart, I'm actually really strict on fics). I'll see you next time!
total: 79/100
reviewer: raelin
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