It totally give out the story already and in a good story should not have the character profile it make it messy and prove you cannot tell the character in the story

Appearance: 4/5

It was nice but too colorful maybe you should make the 'Sold' sign bigger the cover part of her waist. 

Plot: 4/15

the plot was quite same with others people and I know quite bit of it . 

Originality: 2/15

It was same with other people but you gave trailer and having a boyfriend part which most people don't have . 

Grammar/Spelling: 13/20

there is quite alot but good job ( my grammar is worst.)

Characterization: 3/10

you can do better, but for the Daehyun he was too cool ( story) in and the OC was abit of unwilling you can try to make her create trouble.

Flow: 2/10

It was too fast though maybe you can drag longer...

Overall Enjoyment: 7/10

well I enjoy a bit of this story and I like trailers!

Total: 37/100

Reviewer's Notes: Fighting! You can do better !