❛ FluffyPanda711
` ✼ exotic grounds — reviews gallery
FluffyPanda711
reviewed by OnewLuhan
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
title: 3/5
There is a 50/50 chance that I will click on this story.
f/d: 6/10
The font changes at the beginning from Arial to Times New Roman. The character chart is nice, but I feel that it gives too much away. Such as Chanyeol's little blurb, "Fake boyfriend"
appearance: 5/5
It is a pretty nice poster.
plot: 12/15
Good job, it is full of fluffy moments.^^
originality: 11/15
Sorry, but a high school life plus a bunch of guys liking one girl is not too original.
grammar & spelling: 12/20
I found a lot of spelling and grammar errors. You uppercase a lot of words that do not need to be uppercased. You only uppercase if it is after a period, if it is a pronoun, or if it is a title (i.e. Sea Cadet ___), or important place/country/state (i.e. Alaska, China, Statue of Liberty).
flow: 7/10
It is going at a pretty consistent flow.
characterization: 7/10
I feel like the characters are explained well.
overall enjoyment: 7/10
I actually really like cliché storylines. I think they are cute.
total: 70/100
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
remember to credit us and comment after picking up!
Comments