Username: AlisCookieMonster
Story Title (&link): Starbucks Lovers 
Main Characters (+pairings): Jungkook & Mina 
Genre(s): Fluff | Romance | Cute
Current Length (No. of Chapters): 2
Rated?: No
Reviewer: SistarsStar1

_______________ ✦일부분 일; part one; the beginning. ✦_______________


Title: 3/5
Well, I do not really like the title Starbucks Lovers as the story do not really have something to do with Starbucks.

Poster/Background: 4 /5
The poster matched the story and everything, but, I think that Jungkook looks a bit too angry or sad. Since this is a cute poster, he should not be.

Description & Foreword: 5/10
I find your description too short and should be longer. It would not attract readers to read if you have such short description. Some readers will be curious so they will start reading by your short description, but some would not be interested as you didn't really elaborate on your story.



______________ ✦두 번째 부분; the second part; the seam.✦______________


Creativity/Originality: 3/5
Your creativity was good, but your originality was not. How can you just meet for one day, and you started falling in love. Unless it's love at first sight, but your love would not be very... strong to be thinking of him or her every minute or second.

Plot: 10/20
Don't get me wrong, I like the plot. But, it's too unreal.

Spelling, Vocab, and Grammar; 13/15
Good job on this one!

Characterization: 12 /15
Who wants Mary Sues and Marty Stus? Not me! Make sure to make your characters real, not fake! You wrote your story like Jungkook is an angel and I do not hate that, but it's very fake. He's too perfect.



_______________ ✦일부분 삼; part three; the little things. ✦_______________

Chapter Titles: 4/5
I have nothing to say about chapter titles usually but I think it should not be 'Final'. I mean like, have we read your story at all? No. So it should something like,"Starbucks Lovers" or something else that it's not like 'Final'

Flow: 7/10
Woah, woah, woah. You are not going to catch an airplane that is leaving, or are you? You're totally going too fast. Maybe you could this a two or three shot so the story would not go too fast?

Writing Style (format + your style): 10 /10
I love your writing style! It suits the story! Nothing is wrong with this, the format is good.


Extra & Notes;
I hope that despite my harsh comments, you would continue to work hard and be a good writer! Sorry about my harsh comment T^T Thank you!

Total Score: 71/100♡
Yay! Good job!