♕❁The Dating Subject.✎❦
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dubumints
Reviewer: jokinglang
Title (15/15)
It is perfect for your story! It catches the readers eyes!! When I saw it, I said Dating a Subject?
Appearance (5/5)
I like how you have a variety of posters!
Description/Forward (5/5)
Nice! It drew me in and it told the reader what the story is about!
Characters (9/10)
You described them very well!
Plot (15/15)
Your plot is very original!!! I love it!!!
Flow (15/15)
Very good!!!!! I love how it flows!!! Everything is in the right place! it is very descriptive too, which made it feel like you were actually there!
Grammar/Spelling (9/10)
Very little mistakes, but you kept using the wrong verb tenses. Other then that it was perfect.
Originality(15/15)
Totally Original! I've never ever in my whole life read a story like this!!!
Did I Like It? (10/10)
I can't wait to know what happens next!!!!!!
Bonus (5/5)
I really, really love this story!
Total (103/105)
A+ 101-105
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