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rubric:

`Story Title[did it catch my attention?] : -/5
`Appearance[what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : -/10
`Forewords[did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] : -/10
`Plot[was the plot cliche or was it interesting?] : -/15
`Characterization[was I able to learn about the characters?] : -/10
`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : -/10
`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] : -/10
`Flow[was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : -/10
`Writing Style[did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] : -/15
`Overall Enjoyment[did I enjoy this story?] : -/5
`Total : -/100

`Bonus : -/5

Overall Total: -/100

Pick up's:

1. Whisper of my heart by edherei

2. Me, I and My Underwear by borrriing123

3. You again by azn4lyf

4. Is Our Love Meant To Be? by yurikim1601

5. The Key to the Master Bedroom by FanFicWriter20

6. Deceiving Appearances. by moochi

7. Mistakes by migumeki

8. First Love by iampetite

9. It Started with a Promise by keymera

10. Illusions and Memories by cutterpillow

11. Kizuna (Bond Between Us) by sayuriMa

12. The New Beginning by justmeonly

13. Last Summer by leerimrae

14. Loving You In A Crazy World by omgdragon

15. Give me one big kiss already! by Evrlottey

16. As Unexpected by mirahjay

17. This Stupid Boarding School... by -polkadotted

18. Hana Yori Dango: Super Junior Edition by Sweet_Bitterness

19. Scribing Pleasures by ReaReaUmbi

20. Silent Music by jungminian0403

21. The Bloodsuckers' A.Mi.Gos by SKID_11

22. You Weren’t The Reason by B1A4_Kissme

23. Thanks for the prize by AnjhayFD

24. Snow Brigade by Tesshi

25. 168 Hours of Horror by xxnaddiebaddieroxxx

26. 30 steps to quitting Jonghyun by cutterpillow

27. Immoral Retribution by DreamHighLove101

28. You Can’t Go Out with Her?! Can You… by kay_tea114

29. School ... by Minah_sarang

30. My Father's Mistress by jungminian0403

31. Remember Me by katastrophick

32. Alphabet by sodamnxxlillian

33. Living in a Fairytale Life by SHAYNee

34. I LOVE YOU. by flamingpearl10

35. Flower Boy by Chismalover13

36. 1.4.3. by OnceUponATaem

37. How do you let go of something that was never yours? by xxKyoko

38. øØ Language of Love Øø by tofuonew

39. Step Brothers by jolieq

40. Your Eye's by Jessica101

41. Is This A Dream? Apparently Not..... by Finit_Dunlendyou

42. 2PM Goes American by DreamHighLove101

43. Flirtatious by areUscared

44. Cold Flame by RunRose

45. My Angel by Keishota

46. On a Island by joanne200969

47. My love~ you’re beautiful. I’m sorry. by Ticaissoflylikeag6

48. Married Without LOVE by 20thcenturyromeos

49. Meant to be Together by joanne200969

50. Meeting A Guy Three Times A Day= Fate by iluv0r4ng311294

51. My Oppa Hates Me by MikaLikesPie

52. Scarlet's Book. by HanaKyu

53. Kyuhyun... It's been hard on you. by janie6789

54. In This World .. Let Me Only Love You by Keymera

55. FATE OR JUST A COINCIDENCE? by Jaeha--Jung

56. Umma? Where is appa ? by Van_b2utyshawol

57. 30 steps to quitting Jonghyun by cutterpillow

58. Are we... even friends? by HoneyB

59. Alice in Boyfriend Land by ElephantsandCrayons4

60. I Need a Doctor by veVeon

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Ladychi #1 Nov 7, 2018 01:11:21

Chapter 53: Yamaha ni encuentro está historia, alguien tiene una copia, please

CutieWay #2 Jul 7, 2014 03:12:32

I don't know how to explain this, but there is a move in which you move your chest while your fingers are going down. Also the move in which your body is following your body isn't easy for someone who wants to start dancing.

flyingyen #3 Aug 13, 2011 14:52:28

Hey there! Sorry to be leaving a message like this in your comments but Ravenous Temptations are hiring for more staff! We are looking for dedicated graphic designers, reviewers, writers and advertisers! So please help us out because we are overloaded with requests and lack the staff to complete them ^^;;<br />
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ElephantsandCrayons4 #4 Jun 20, 2011 11:50:28

Hello I was just wondering if my story was going to be reviewed? I put up a request on the day you said would be the last day of accepting reviews so I don't know if it's valid or not

janie6789 #5 Jun 13, 2011 19:18:18

Ahh kay. Thank you for the review and the encouraging words and the great score :D<br />
I really like my poster though!! :P I think the shop I used was fantastic. I didn't want a quote because it seems cheesy to me, and to be honest, book covers never show the story line anyways, so I disagree with you in that respect. I also find backgrounds to be distracting when navigating through the chapters, which is why I don't use one. ;) <br />
I think your comment on the length of it also got me thinking, and I may go through and have a compilation of the "must read" chapters for new readers so they can skip over some of them. Thank you very much again for the review :)

janie6789 #6 Jun 13, 2011 12:53:05

@Chp. 51: To be fair, the real Taemin went to normal school until after Ring Ding Dong, if I'm not mistaken. There was a rumour that he was bullied at school, with a series of pictures of him in class. He transferred to an arts school after Ring Dong Dong.

HanaKyu #7 Jun 13, 2011 02:56:44

Omo. Thank you so much! LOL I targeted that I would get a 70.. Hihi. Yeah, I at grammar and describing things! ^^ But I will try my best to fix that! I really appreciated it that you have time to review my story. ^^ And again, thank you! <3

__eccedentesiast_ #8 Jun 10, 2011 12:07:13

Just posted up the review

__eccedentesiast_ #9 Jun 10, 2011 10:24:19

Thanks for the review I'll put it up when I'm not on my phone