Reviewer: aznchika @ http://monochromaticpixel.tumblr.com/

FANFIC LINK: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/21484/

`Story Title[did it catch my attention?] : 5/5

-Yes, in fact, it really did catch my attention! The ‘comedy story’ part was the reason why I wanted to review this fic first. I was in the mood for a comedy [:

`Appearance[what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : 7/10

-I found the background slightly distracting with all of its bright colors and such. The poster, however, isn’t that bad. I love the picture of Key! But when I first looked at it, I was like ‘Why is BEAST’ in the middle of nowhere?’ Either way, I still like it! The splash of colors makes it fun to look at!

`Forewords[did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] : 8/10

-In a way, it does make me want to read more, but I bet the readers will be even more drawn in if you include a small scene from the story.

`Plot[was the plot cliche or was it interesting?] : 12/15

-The Queenka and Kingka titles are cliché and doesn’t exactly make the story interesting. In my opinion, I dislike the fact that there are Kingkas and Queenkas. In your case however, it makes up the storyline, so I’m just saying my opinion. The way they interact are different than other stories, so kudos for that.

`Characterization[was I able to learn about the characters?] : 10/10

-I love the way you present the characters! Key is such a diva, and Hana is hilarious! The way they’re constantly trying to get each other makes the story interesting! Though these kinds of characters are common in fanfics, you added your own twist. Full points!

`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : 9/10

-In a way it was creative, but in a way it was also cliché. Like I stated before, the Kingka and Queenka titles are used often. However, you added your own unique twist to the story, so that’s why it’s more original than the others.

`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] : 9/10

-Overall your grammar and vocabulary was pretty good. I understood everything you were trying to tell the audience, and the way you arrange your sentences suited the story. Great job!

`Flow[was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : 10/10

-The flow was perfect! It didn’t go too slow, but it didn’t go too fast either! Full marks!

`Writing Style[did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] : 15/15

-I also love your writing style, though I would appreciate it if you didn’t cuss too much (lol, I’m too innocent). Other than that, you did great [:

`Overall Enjoyment[did I enjoy this story?] : 5/5

-Yes, I really did enjoy the story. It was funny and cute, and I love Key and Hana!

`Total : 90/100

`Bonus : 2/5

-Their pranks are hilarious!

-Key and Hana was just so cute! [: