Scribing Pleasures by ReaReaUmbi
Monochromatic Pixel's Review Request Shopllovex3_her @ http://monochromaticpixel.tumblr.com/
Title: 4/5
The title is totally relevant to the whole story. And I like the title actually. It would surely raise my curiousity, after all I never read a title like this and I would definately consider reading it!
Poster(If there is one): /15
None, don't worry, I won't count the marks in.
Description: /10
None, don't worry, I won't count the marks in.
Forward: 6/10
Gosh..that forward sounds full or and angst. Its nice though, reading it that sounds like a poem.
Character descriptions (only if have one): /10
None, don't worry, I won't count the marks in.
Plot: 17/45
The plot is actually very interesting and unique. Although most of the chapters consists of only , and its more like a one-shot, but it is still very interesting. After all, personally, I never read much about anyone writing such ty and creative story plotline. Good job!
Writing: 22/40
The writing is clear and easy to understand. I love your way of writing, everything seems to be so real. The mood could be felt and almost everything could be imagined in my mind. Exactly what I goes for when reading. I want writing style that can allow readers to imagine, and your's is amazingly well!
Spelling/grammar: 18/25
Not much to comment on. Good thing though. There's not a lot of spelling mistakes or grammatical errors. Once again, a good thing!
Chapter titles (only if have titles): 9/10
I really love each and every chapter titles! They each has their own connections to the chapter, which was very very related. Its kinda fun to read the chapter titles, seeing it goes from A to B to C to ect ect..keke.
Ending (only if completed): /20
None, don't worry, I won't count the marks in.
Rated scenes (only if rated): 10/10
Your rated scenes are wonderfully perfect. I can totally imagine the whole thing in my mind! And well....its ..LOL. The feel is quite there, everything is perfect. ((:
Total: 86/145
Criteria: A-
Criteria: A-
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