The Bloodsuckers' A.Mi.Gos @  http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/36921/

[REVIEWED BY SHERIOKA] @ http://monochromaticpixel.tumblr.com/

`Story Title[did it catch my attention?] : It caught my attention alright, it was creative and unique! Although I remind you to keep the title shorter and more simplified, so it won’t reveal too much about the story. Reading the title ‘bloodsucker’ You’d think of vampire right away, so it might give the story away too much, but somehow it matches the story and doesn’t give away a lot, so it’s pretty much okay.  4/5

`Appearance[what was my first impression? Did it catch my attention?] : The poster from the forewords doesn’t really fit with the vampire story well, but I have to say…The poster is really cute. The effect and everything caught my eye. As for the other poster, it matches the story well and that’s the only thing important. 10/10

`Forewords[did your forewords make me wanting to read more?] :It did! The forewords gave a brief summary about each mini story, you don’t reveal too much or too less and the way you write the forewords make the story interesting yet mysterious. 10/10

`Plot[was the plot cliche or was it interesting?] :Many people write about vampires and such, but your story was different than the others and it was surprisingly very enjoyable to read. The plot’s not too difficult and perplexed; it’s just what a good story needs. Although you didn’t actually write a story, but I still get the point of what you want to express. But you should remember you shouldn’t make stories all due to ‘fate’ and stuff like, ‘we bumped into each other’. It sometimes makes the story boring since many other fans write that type of story. 14/15

`Characterization[was I able to learn about the characters?] : Yes, each character has a very different personality, you stated that clear in the forewords. Although I think you explained a bit too much. You shouldn’t write so much in the forewords, it’ll spoil the story. 7/10

`Creativity/Originality[was it creative?] : Like what I said about the plot, your story was very interesting. Not really creative, but it was nice to read and you develop the story differently, so it could still count very creative. I liked the mini stories a lot, it express a lot about the SHINee vampires.  7/10

`Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[was I able to understand what you were trying to say?] :I can’t believe it! No mistakes at all, you’re a very considerate writer, that’s a good thing. Keep up the good job! 10/10

`Flow[was it too fast or too slow to my liking?] : I’m not sure how to answer this since your story isn’t quite well, a story. But I do like how you don’t make each of the mini stories full with crap and nothing. In each paragraph, the pace was steady and you even things out. 9/10

`Writing Style[did your writing style make it easy for me to read?] :It was easy, but you should state who’s talking more clearly, other than that, the style was perfectly fine and well written. 14/15

`Overall Enjoyment[did I enjoy this story?] : Heck yeah! The story was full of endless surprises and each story was so cute. You didn’t even need any advice; you’re doing so well on your own. Keep up the good work! 5/5

`Total : 90/100

`Bonus : 5/5

Overall Total: 95/100

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