His chest felt so hollow, so empty

Stupid You,

Gaheun's POV:
 
 

                I step out of my bedroom in the cottage-like house, and make my way to the kitchen. I grab a bagel and put it in the toaster, as I wait, I look out to the balcony through the glass doors. Seunghyun was standing there, leaning on the rail, motionless. Hmm... Wonder what he's up to. I think as I start to eat.
 
 

The air was so refreshing, and the sounds of the waves were so relaxing, it makes you feel so carefree.

"BOOOOO!!!!"I shout as loud as I can.

"AHHHHH!!!!!!! "Seunghyun shouts as he drops to the floor. Haha, that was a good reaction. He looks up at me with a 'WTF' face, and I just laugh. Gosh, it feels good to laugh.

"... Can I help you?" he asks, irritated.

"Nope!" I answer.

"Okay, so do you want something?"

"Nope!"

"Then, why did you do that?"

"Nope."

"That makes no sense."

"Nope."

"Oh... I see what you're doing" he says, catching on to my payback from the car incident.

"...Nope."

"Two can play at that game." he says, looking as if he had an idea. I should be worried, shouldn’t I?

"...Nope?" I answer. What's he planning? And how is he not irritated?! I'm irritated by saying this so many times! But I'm not giving up that easily.

"Do you shower?" he asks, with a know it all smile on his face. Oh gosh. C'mon Gaheun... You can't lose.

"... Nope." I answer, a little grudgingly.

"Oh... No wonder it smells funny." he says, still smiling. "Do you wipe after you use the washroom?"
Damn it. Why? Why me? But. I. Can't. Lose.

"Nope." I shiver at how gross that would be.

"ahahahahahaha! That's gross! Do you wear clothes when you're at home?" What the heck?! Where does he even get these from?!

"... Nope." I answer, really struggling to say it. He laughs again.

"Oh, you're pretty good at this," he says, in a competitive tone.

"...Nope." I answer again, smiling at him. He stands up and looks down at me.

"... I'm going to kiss you know, will you object?" he asks, his gaze intensifying.

He leans in towards me... WHAT THE HECK?!  Is he serious?!?!

I quickly back away, and punch him on the shoulder.

"You pooface." I say like I'm 7, and walk back into the kitchen. I close the glass doors behind me and turn on the TV. What the heck was that? I think as I try to focus on the programme.
 
 

 

Seunghyun's POV:
 
 

                I wonder if she's mad... She hasn't said anything for a while. I quietly go back into the house, and see her sleeping on the couch. I should probably bring her back to her room. I pick her up, and carry her to her bed. On the way, she mumbles quietly to herself, maybe she's having a bad dream. I put her down and am about to let go when she grabs my shirt.

"Don't go..." she whispers as her forehead creases. She's not talking to me is she?

I let her go and try to stand back up, but her hand is still clutching my shirt.

"Just stay here... don't leave me..." she murmurs again, slightly stirring in her sleep.

"Gaheun, are you... Okay?" I whisper to her. I know, stupid to ask her when she's asleep, but it's a reflex reaction to ask if she's okay.

To my surprise, she nods a couple of times, her forehead still creased. She can hear me?

"Just... promise to stay... kay?" she answers again, her words slow and staggered.

"Okay... Just sleep." I answer.  To be honest, I can't help but feel a little good that she’s asking me to stay. It has to mean a little right? Even if she isn't fully conscious. I mean, when you're dreaming, don't you say or see things that you want to see?

               

                I sit down on her bed, and she let's go of my shirt. I push a few strands of her hair away from her face, and after that, decide to smooth out her forehead as well. Wouldn't want it to get stuck like that. I'm not going to pretend, I actually enjoy this moment. I can't help but imagine what it would be like if I did this every day, if she asked me to stay with her every day.

 

                While I'm daydreaming, my hand still touching her forehead, she mumbles something again.

"Hmmm?" I ask quietly. She mumbles again, I still can't make out what she says.

"I don't understand, Gaheun."

"... I can't wait till this is all over" I don't say anything, and just continue with fixing her hair. Dreaming probably. "Then... We can... Be together... Right?" she asks.

"Mmm." I answer, following along to see where this is going.

"I love you... Donghae," she murmurs while she smiles slightly. My hand stops, and just rests on her head. She seems to be expecting an answer...

"I know," Is what I say. So, she's been thinking I washim the entire time, huh? You're such a fool, Seunghyun. Such an idiot.
 
 

Third Person POV:

 

                Seunghyun had felt what a broken heart is like when he lost Minkyung, but this feeling was so different... It's as if something had pushed his heart right out of his chest. His chest felt so hollow, so empty. But he still sat beside Gaheun, although she didn't know it was Seunghyun, Seunghyun could only pretend she did.
 

 

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Hey Readers!!! Hope you enjoy these two chapter updates!! :)

Anyways, I was just curious about which character you like the best :P It doesnt have to be a main one, it can be a character with a smaller role as well :P

So... which character do you like best?!?!

and also... I want to know... Do you guys like Donghae, or Seunghyun better? :P lol. i'm sorta getting ideas for endings right now :P haha. its a little far, but i just wanted something to think about while writing my next few chapters :)

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Adoree
#1
Chapter 87: Fooobtteqafobhvdzch....

So speechless....
One of the best stories ever!

Loved both endings...
so well written :D
Beat fic omg
Sibecca407 #2
Chapter 87: so damn sweet, omg, keep up the good work & will anticipate for more stories! ^^
blazensaddles #3
Chapter 87: guess what i just did~~~~~
:3 lol i just read this again XD woot!!!! still made me cry ._.
hellokimchi
#4
AHHHHH! It ended!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congrats to a completed fic!
So I picked Epilogue 2 to read cause I can't bear sad endings. You're gonna make me cry, I know so. Props to you for being such a good writer.
OMG, I loved it! Gaheun and Donghae got married and had a kid!!! The kid was so cute thinking Appa had an imaginary friend. You lit a smile up my face. I miss the happy atmosphere, but the sad stuff really moved me.
The ending was so cute and romantic. I liked how the dialogue related back to the title. Best ultimate ending.

Please write more fics in the future. I would read anything you write.
playmirth
#5
Epilogue 2 : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!! Such a sweet ending !!!! >< I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REAAAAAALLYYYYYYY LOVE IT (copy and paste did me a lot of work :p) I cried at the beginning because I thought it was Gaheun who died ! >< Then I read..... 'him' WAIT WHAT !? 'HIM' !? Then again, I think that the sad ending is on the previous chapter. I still cried anyway, and stopped when haeeun talks to seunghyun. I know, I'm so stupid.
Then it started again when donghae played with gaheun, when he backhugs gaheun after she calls him a dinosaur ! You oughta know, you wrote it !!! XD
I mean, they really went through a lot of things to be where they are now, see ? This is sooo sweet, and what I love even more is the fact that this is sooo beautifully written ! >o< Such a refreshing leisure time after midterm ! >< YESSS, my midterm ended ! Hooray to me !!!! \(´▽`)/
Overall, I LOVE the sad ending more than the happy one ! ^o^ It gives me more impact, >< and... Well, I just like sad endings.
playmirth
#6
Epilogue 1 : I AM CRYING THE WHOLE TIME AND AM STILL CRYING WHEN WRITE THIS ! ><
You're sucha genius, unni ! >< I'm totally speechless, I can't write. *wipes tears*
Really, LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE THE SAD ENDING ! YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE SAD THINGS, RIGHT ? You have no idea how much my heart beat when I read the one where she finally says "I Love You" and the fact that she can no longer say it to him is.... Too heartbreaking ! >< And YeJin, I love her more after this. Her way of soothing donghae is.... *sigh* I can imagine the scene in my head, donghae in the cafe where the first love VCR is taken, yejin sitting on the edge of one of the table. He enters on a twilight sky surrounding the area, their faces were almost invisible, just the silhouette. :'(
And he was reading the letter with that black shirt he wore on SMA, GAHH black shirt seems so hot on donghae. And anyways ! Great job on the sad ending ! >o<
blazensaddles #7
to be honest, they both are very good. i liked both endings, and i cant really pick a favorite. i dont know if you care at all, but here are my (summarized? trying not to give a lot away) thoughts on the endings-
Epilogue 1: short, but a lot of emotion. of course im sad, but im also happy. (Gaheun and Seunghyun).
Epilogue 2: very happy :) again sad and happy. (Seunghyun and Gaheun) at least both are together. HaeEun, haha cute. Dinosaur finally comes out :D
if i were to pick one, it would be Epilogue.....2.
meowchie09
#8
i love the second epilogue.. but the first one is good too..
so sad it already ended >.< but great story :))