Saved By The Enemy

Stupid You,

Seunghyun's POV:
I can hear the girl shriek as we break through the locked doors.
 
One guy was already facing us, the other froze. He was in the process of ing her top. Before I even fully processed what I just saw, both guys were on the ground, and Kim Bum was untying her.
 
 

Gaheun's POV:
                    Within a split second someone fell to the floor, shaking the ground slightly. The tug on my shirt loosened. Almost immediately after, an unrecognizable voice tells me,

"It’s alright, it's over." as they untied me.
I quickly tried to rebutton my shirt, but my hands were so shaky I struggled to even hold the button.

Footsteps run away,

"Sang Bum, make sure they don't get away." it was Seunghyun's voice.

"Got it." the voice answered

I managed to button two of the ones that were undone, my hands still shaking. The blindfold was taken off. I saw Seunghyun, staring at me with an intense look. My vision became blurred, and my chest began to shake. The shock finally kicked in.
 
 

                    He gently pushed me against the headboard, and put the blanket over me. My tears wouldn't stop flowing, I wanted to stop, but just couldn't. He sat on the bed, half a body width away from me, unmoving. After a few minutes, he turned slightly, and patted the top of my head. My chest was still shaking crazily because of my broken breathing, but after a while, it calmed down.

I looked ahead, my vision wasn't so blurred anymore, and I saw another new figure walk in.

"We're good, Hyukshin and Hyungjoo are keeping them in the garage till we go back to em. What do you wanna do with them?" so he's the unrecognizable voice.

"Nothing yet... Actually, we can tell them to "teach those guys a lesson"” Seunghyun replied, with a slightly ironic tone in his voice.

"ha, sure thing. I'll go now," the new guy said, looking at me briefly, nodding slightly.

"No. Stay here for a bit, okay? I gotta figure this out... Kim bum saved you; he won't do anything to hurt you." Seunghyun said, talking to me at the end. So this guy is called Kim bum.

 

                    After that, he got up, and quickly walked out of the room. Kim Bum just stood at the foot of the bed and stared at me for a minute. After a few minutes he unpursed his lips and sat in the exact spot Seunghyun was in. He began to pat my head, usually I would have moved away or something, but it was really comforting at that moment in time.

 

 

Seunghyun's POV:
 
"Seunghyun, what's wrong?" Father asks when I storm into his office. I don't even bother to look at him, and directly go for Junhyung. I punch him right in the jaw, he almost lost his balance. I was ready to get him again, until father grabbed me wrist.

"What's wrong with you?! Are you crazy?!" I yell.

"What?! It's payback!" Junhyung shouts back. This struck a nerve; he doesn't even pretend to not know. I free my wrist from father's grasp.

"Father, I thought you agreed that we won't hurt anyone innocent." I say, switching my gaze to the one who was holding me back.

"We did, didn't we?" is all he said. What the hell does that mean?

"Yeah? Then why did you let Junhyung get those guys to try to her?!" the words slipped out of my mouth like poison, it burned my throat as I yelled. Father looked shocked.

" Junhyung! I thought you said you were just gonna scare her!" he exclaimed. Junhyung answered with a looked mixed of surprise and anger, and didn't say a word.

"Whatever the case is, I don't care. I told you I would deal with this on my own. So I will. From now on, I'm going to watch over her." I stated.

"Seunghyun ah, you can't just do that. You have so many other responsibilities. You can't just tend to that one girl. And why do you want to protect her anyways?... she is an enemy." father disapproved.

"I'll still take care of my other responsibilities. But she will be 100% under my watch. I will decide who watches her if I leave. This is revenge for me, isn't it? Then I'll deal with it on my own. She’s innocent."
 
 

                    That was the last thing that was said or heard, because I left the room. I walked back to the girl's room to find her sleeping, her head resting on her knees. Beside here was Kim Bum, his hand resting on her head, he was also asleep. Sheesh, Kim Bum is always so lazy, I tell him to keep watch and he sleeps on the job.

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Adoree
#1
Chapter 87: Fooobtteqafobhvdzch....

So speechless....
One of the best stories ever!

Loved both endings...
so well written :D
Beat fic omg
Sibecca407 #2
Chapter 87: so damn sweet, omg, keep up the good work & will anticipate for more stories! ^^
blazensaddles #3
Chapter 87: guess what i just did~~~~~
:3 lol i just read this again XD woot!!!! still made me cry ._.
hellokimchi
#4
AHHHHH! It ended!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congrats to a completed fic!
So I picked Epilogue 2 to read cause I can't bear sad endings. You're gonna make me cry, I know so. Props to you for being such a good writer.
OMG, I loved it! Gaheun and Donghae got married and had a kid!!! The kid was so cute thinking Appa had an imaginary friend. You lit a smile up my face. I miss the happy atmosphere, but the sad stuff really moved me.
The ending was so cute and romantic. I liked how the dialogue related back to the title. Best ultimate ending.

Please write more fics in the future. I would read anything you write.
playmirth
#5
Epilogue 2 : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!! Such a sweet ending !!!! >< I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REAAAAAALLYYYYYYY LOVE IT (copy and paste did me a lot of work :p) I cried at the beginning because I thought it was Gaheun who died ! >< Then I read..... 'him' WAIT WHAT !? 'HIM' !? Then again, I think that the sad ending is on the previous chapter. I still cried anyway, and stopped when haeeun talks to seunghyun. I know, I'm so stupid.
Then it started again when donghae played with gaheun, when he backhugs gaheun after she calls him a dinosaur ! You oughta know, you wrote it !!! XD
I mean, they really went through a lot of things to be where they are now, see ? This is sooo sweet, and what I love even more is the fact that this is sooo beautifully written ! >o< Such a refreshing leisure time after midterm ! >< YESSS, my midterm ended ! Hooray to me !!!! \(´▽`)/
Overall, I LOVE the sad ending more than the happy one ! ^o^ It gives me more impact, >< and... Well, I just like sad endings.
playmirth
#6
Epilogue 1 : I AM CRYING THE WHOLE TIME AND AM STILL CRYING WHEN WRITE THIS ! ><
You're sucha genius, unni ! >< I'm totally speechless, I can't write. *wipes tears*
Really, LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE THE SAD ENDING ! YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE SAD THINGS, RIGHT ? You have no idea how much my heart beat when I read the one where she finally says "I Love You" and the fact that she can no longer say it to him is.... Too heartbreaking ! >< And YeJin, I love her more after this. Her way of soothing donghae is.... *sigh* I can imagine the scene in my head, donghae in the cafe where the first love VCR is taken, yejin sitting on the edge of one of the table. He enters on a twilight sky surrounding the area, their faces were almost invisible, just the silhouette. :'(
And he was reading the letter with that black shirt he wore on SMA, GAHH black shirt seems so hot on donghae. And anyways ! Great job on the sad ending ! >o<
blazensaddles #7
to be honest, they both are very good. i liked both endings, and i cant really pick a favorite. i dont know if you care at all, but here are my (summarized? trying not to give a lot away) thoughts on the endings-
Epilogue 1: short, but a lot of emotion. of course im sad, but im also happy. (Gaheun and Seunghyun).
Epilogue 2: very happy :) again sad and happy. (Seunghyun and Gaheun) at least both are together. HaeEun, haha cute. Dinosaur finally comes out :D
if i were to pick one, it would be Epilogue.....2.
meowchie09
#8
i love the second epilogue.. but the first one is good too..
so sad it already ended >.< but great story :))