You're a fool, Hyung. You like that girl don't you?

Stupid You,

Gaheun’s POV:

 

"It seems you are a very important asset to us, Gaheun." Mr. Choi says. I don't say a word; I don't even understand what happened here.

"Yeah, I think it's time to actually do some damage. Did you see that guy's face? He was totally gonna-" Junhyung begins, but he's interrupted by Mr.Choi.

"Junhyung, I get your point. Even just mentioning Gaheun's accident, or anything touching her, set him off edge. Look at what he and his friends did to our home. Gaheun, I'm afraid my promise will no longer be valid. Your stay with us is going to be short lived-"

"YOU may not be willing to keep the promise. But I will. And anyone who endangers her will have to answer to me." Seunghyun lashes out, his voice ferocious. He steps in front of me, pulling me behind him. Kim Bum continues to stand beside me, placing a hand on my shoulder. I saw this coming all along though... I'm a hostage. And every hostage that I'd ever heard of ended up being found randomly a year or so later, of course, no longer breathing. I must've looked terrified or something, because Kim Bum whispers into my ear,

 "Don't worry, Seunghyun will never let them hurt you. And neither will I." I look to him, his eyes are intense, and so full of power. I look to Seunghyun, he has a ruthless look to his face.

"Seunghyun, you wanted revenge, didn't you? Why are you stopping it now?" Mr. Choi asks, getting angry.

"I'm not stopping it. It's still ongoing. This IS what I want. The man who loves her IS being tortured this very second." So that's why he's protecting me, to make sure Donghae is still suffering.

"What about Minkyung then huh? What about her?! She's dead now. How is that revenge going to be fulfilled?!" Junhyung yelled.

Seunghyun was about to attack Junhyung, but Hyukshin and Hyungjoo grabbed him before he could get to it. Hyukshin and Hyungjoo both have bruises all over them... They fought, didn't they? I wince, if those two look like that, how hurt are the people who came here?... How hurt is Donghae?

"Seunghyun!" Mr.Choi yells angrily. "We'll discuss this in my office. Right now."

"I'm not giving in. Not a chance." Seunghyun replies flatly.

                The three of them storm off, everyone clears a path for them. Two guys come towards me, but Kim Bum immediately notices and says "Get this place cleaned up. I'll watch her."

 I had to check back to make sure it was actually Kim Bum who spoke, the voice sounded so… harsh. When I look back at him he just smiles quickly and takes my arm, leading me back to my prison of a room.
 
 

 

Seunghyun's POV:

 

"T.O.P Hyung. I don't get your logic at all! Wouldn't it make sense if we take a life for a life? They took Minkyung's, we should take Gaheun's." Junhyung states. I can tell father is leaning towards his ideas, damn it.

"Shut up and just listen okay? You say that Donghae looked crazy when you threatened to harm Gaheun right? Then let's just keep it at that." I say. It’s true, I want Donghae to suffer. I want every single one of them to suffer. But not Gaheun, she wasn't even involved when anything happened.

"WHAT?! Are you crazy?! What's the point of keeping her?! Uncle, I think we should just get rid of her, and I know you agree too." Junhyung shouts

"You're not touching her!" I yell. I didn't even notice how loud I was; it wasn't supposed to have been that loud.

Junhyung and father look at each other, then back at me.

"You're a fool, Hyung. You like that girl don't you?!" Junhyung says, holding back his laughter.

"No. I don't." I say flatly

"Sure Hyung, sure. But really, everyone can see it; you defend her ALL the time, almost exactly like how you were protective over Minkyung." He answers, smirking.

"You've got to be joking me. It was agreed that I was going to handle the revenge MY way. Don't try to control-"

"Seunghyun. Stop. We agreed that you were in control, but right now, we aren't seeing progress. If you don't explain to us what your entire plan is, we will take over." father says sternly.Damn. He's taken Junhyung's side.

"Okay here's the plan. We use Gaheun to make Donghae and the rest of them suffer. We've been doing pretty well with this, right? It's payback for when they had Minkyung. I bet they feel the same way we did a year ago." I explain, emphasizing the fact that we are USING Gaheun, not hurting her.

"Yes, we get that. But that's not good enough Seunghyun. You know that. It's not only about payback anymore. We need to let our opposition know that we aren't to be messed with: the simplest way to get this message across is to kill her. Plus, your way doesn't compensate for the lost life." Father criticizes, getting impatient.

"I haven't finished explaining yet. We WILL be taking a life for a life. But not Gaheun's, it makes no sense to take an innocent life for an innocent life lost. And I know that after my plan, we'll be superior to them." I reason with them. My father’s eyebrows rise,

"Oh? And who's life shall be taken? How will your plan give us the power?" he asks, now intrigued.

"We're not harming Gaheun, the way to get revenge and gain power to finally end our rivalry is this: We are going to kill Donghae."
 

 

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Adoree
#1
Chapter 87: Fooobtteqafobhvdzch....

So speechless....
One of the best stories ever!

Loved both endings...
so well written :D
Beat fic omg
Sibecca407 #2
Chapter 87: so damn sweet, omg, keep up the good work & will anticipate for more stories! ^^
blazensaddles #3
Chapter 87: guess what i just did~~~~~
:3 lol i just read this again XD woot!!!! still made me cry ._.
hellokimchi
#4
AHHHHH! It ended!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congrats to a completed fic!
So I picked Epilogue 2 to read cause I can't bear sad endings. You're gonna make me cry, I know so. Props to you for being such a good writer.
OMG, I loved it! Gaheun and Donghae got married and had a kid!!! The kid was so cute thinking Appa had an imaginary friend. You lit a smile up my face. I miss the happy atmosphere, but the sad stuff really moved me.
The ending was so cute and romantic. I liked how the dialogue related back to the title. Best ultimate ending.

Please write more fics in the future. I would read anything you write.
playmirth
#5
Epilogue 2 : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!! Such a sweet ending !!!! >< I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REAAAAAALLYYYYYYY LOVE IT (copy and paste did me a lot of work :p) I cried at the beginning because I thought it was Gaheun who died ! >< Then I read..... 'him' WAIT WHAT !? 'HIM' !? Then again, I think that the sad ending is on the previous chapter. I still cried anyway, and stopped when haeeun talks to seunghyun. I know, I'm so stupid.
Then it started again when donghae played with gaheun, when he backhugs gaheun after she calls him a dinosaur ! You oughta know, you wrote it !!! XD
I mean, they really went through a lot of things to be where they are now, see ? This is sooo sweet, and what I love even more is the fact that this is sooo beautifully written ! >o< Such a refreshing leisure time after midterm ! >< YESSS, my midterm ended ! Hooray to me !!!! \(´▽`)/
Overall, I LOVE the sad ending more than the happy one ! ^o^ It gives me more impact, >< and... Well, I just like sad endings.
playmirth
#6
Epilogue 1 : I AM CRYING THE WHOLE TIME AND AM STILL CRYING WHEN WRITE THIS ! ><
You're sucha genius, unni ! >< I'm totally speechless, I can't write. *wipes tears*
Really, LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE THE SAD ENDING ! YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE SAD THINGS, RIGHT ? You have no idea how much my heart beat when I read the one where she finally says "I Love You" and the fact that she can no longer say it to him is.... Too heartbreaking ! >< And YeJin, I love her more after this. Her way of soothing donghae is.... *sigh* I can imagine the scene in my head, donghae in the cafe where the first love VCR is taken, yejin sitting on the edge of one of the table. He enters on a twilight sky surrounding the area, their faces were almost invisible, just the silhouette. :'(
And he was reading the letter with that black shirt he wore on SMA, GAHH black shirt seems so hot on donghae. And anyways ! Great job on the sad ending ! >o<
blazensaddles #7
to be honest, they both are very good. i liked both endings, and i cant really pick a favorite. i dont know if you care at all, but here are my (summarized? trying not to give a lot away) thoughts on the endings-
Epilogue 1: short, but a lot of emotion. of course im sad, but im also happy. (Gaheun and Seunghyun).
Epilogue 2: very happy :) again sad and happy. (Seunghyun and Gaheun) at least both are together. HaeEun, haha cute. Dinosaur finally comes out :D
if i were to pick one, it would be Epilogue.....2.
meowchie09
#8
i love the second epilogue.. but the first one is good too..
so sad it already ended >.< but great story :))