Donghae, you came for me. How did he hear me?

Stupid You,

 

 

 

Gaheun's POV:

               

                At times like this, I really wish I had a cellphone or iPod to play around with.  They gave me a huge room, with nothing to do to occupy myself while I'm quarantined in here. So what can I do? Sit around. My mind drifted off to Donghae.  Where are you? Are you okay?  If there was ever a moment when I wished Donghae would make fun of me or tease me, it'd be right now. I'd feel so much more comforted. I hear a knock on the door. Before I can ask who it is, two guys walk in, locking the doors behind them. For a few seconds, I just stare at them, staring at me, with smirks on their faces.
 

                Next thing I knew, I was blindfolded. I was fighting darkness; my limbs were being pulled and I was fighting to keep them free. One of the guys was pushing down on my shoulders, while the other pulled my arm. He tied my arm, probably to the end of the head board. In a second, my other hand was tied. He pulled my leg, and I kicked with all my might, I didn't even think about kicking, my legs had a life of their own. I kick him, I think right at his face, because I hear a voice say,

"Ow! You Fu-"

"Shut up and hurry! I'm getting impatient!" A voice closer to me says. He must be the one holding me down. I continue to struggle, flinging my arms and legs, my ears ringing.

 “Crap. Enough is enough already, it's getting annoying." The one closest to me says before he covers my mouth with his hand. The moment he did that, the loud, piercing background noise stopped. It was at that moment I realized I had been screaming the whole time.
 
Donghae.  Donghae. Where are you?! I need you. Donghae, please. Please come. Save me. Please. Tears were falling uncontrollably as I struggle to free my arms and legs. It’s no use. This is it, Isn't it? I'm done for... Donghae, save me. Before it’s too late. Please? Even though I know Donghae can't hear me, and won't be able to save me no matter how loud I scream his name, I did anyways... There’s nothing else I could do.
 
               

                Right after I yelled Donghae's name, the doors slam open. ... Donghae…?

 

 

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hey i know this is short! but i wanted to update it still!! hopefully the next chapter will be up tomorrow!! BUT if its not! happy holidays and merry christmas to everyone! :)

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Adoree
#1
Chapter 87: Fooobtteqafobhvdzch....

So speechless....
One of the best stories ever!

Loved both endings...
so well written :D
Beat fic omg
Sibecca407 #2
Chapter 87: so damn sweet, omg, keep up the good work & will anticipate for more stories! ^^
blazensaddles #3
Chapter 87: guess what i just did~~~~~
:3 lol i just read this again XD woot!!!! still made me cry ._.
hellokimchi
#4
AHHHHH! It ended!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congrats to a completed fic!
So I picked Epilogue 2 to read cause I can't bear sad endings. You're gonna make me cry, I know so. Props to you for being such a good writer.
OMG, I loved it! Gaheun and Donghae got married and had a kid!!! The kid was so cute thinking Appa had an imaginary friend. You lit a smile up my face. I miss the happy atmosphere, but the sad stuff really moved me.
The ending was so cute and romantic. I liked how the dialogue related back to the title. Best ultimate ending.

Please write more fics in the future. I would read anything you write.
playmirth
#5
Epilogue 2 : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!! Such a sweet ending !!!! >< I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REAAAAAALLYYYYYYY LOVE IT (copy and paste did me a lot of work :p) I cried at the beginning because I thought it was Gaheun who died ! >< Then I read..... 'him' WAIT WHAT !? 'HIM' !? Then again, I think that the sad ending is on the previous chapter. I still cried anyway, and stopped when haeeun talks to seunghyun. I know, I'm so stupid.
Then it started again when donghae played with gaheun, when he backhugs gaheun after she calls him a dinosaur ! You oughta know, you wrote it !!! XD
I mean, they really went through a lot of things to be where they are now, see ? This is sooo sweet, and what I love even more is the fact that this is sooo beautifully written ! >o< Such a refreshing leisure time after midterm ! >< YESSS, my midterm ended ! Hooray to me !!!! \(´▽`)/
Overall, I LOVE the sad ending more than the happy one ! ^o^ It gives me more impact, >< and... Well, I just like sad endings.
playmirth
#6
Epilogue 1 : I AM CRYING THE WHOLE TIME AND AM STILL CRYING WHEN WRITE THIS ! ><
You're sucha genius, unni ! >< I'm totally speechless, I can't write. *wipes tears*
Really, LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE THE SAD ENDING ! YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE SAD THINGS, RIGHT ? You have no idea how much my heart beat when I read the one where she finally says "I Love You" and the fact that she can no longer say it to him is.... Too heartbreaking ! >< And YeJin, I love her more after this. Her way of soothing donghae is.... *sigh* I can imagine the scene in my head, donghae in the cafe where the first love VCR is taken, yejin sitting on the edge of one of the table. He enters on a twilight sky surrounding the area, their faces were almost invisible, just the silhouette. :'(
And he was reading the letter with that black shirt he wore on SMA, GAHH black shirt seems so hot on donghae. And anyways ! Great job on the sad ending ! >o<
blazensaddles #7
to be honest, they both are very good. i liked both endings, and i cant really pick a favorite. i dont know if you care at all, but here are my (summarized? trying not to give a lot away) thoughts on the endings-
Epilogue 1: short, but a lot of emotion. of course im sad, but im also happy. (Gaheun and Seunghyun).
Epilogue 2: very happy :) again sad and happy. (Seunghyun and Gaheun) at least both are together. HaeEun, haha cute. Dinosaur finally comes out :D
if i were to pick one, it would be Epilogue.....2.
meowchie09
#8
i love the second epilogue.. but the first one is good too..
so sad it already ended >.< but great story :))