And So The Real Story Begins.

Stupid You,

Donghae’s POV:

Gaehun is taking FOREVER to get ready… >.<” she doesn’t even wear a lot of make up or anything, she’s such a slowpoke.
“Gaheun, are you almost ready to go? I’m BORED!” maybe I can rush her.

“Yeah! I just can’t find…” her voice got muffled in the other room.

“What?!”

“I can’t find my CELLPHONE!” She answered, irritated. I look down to my hand. Oops.

“…I have it!”

“WHAT?!!?” she walks out from the hall, wearing a semi loose t-shirt, jean shorts and a pair of white ankle socks. That’s cute. Ooh, angry face… :S … Is it bad that I still find it cute?

She just looks at me for a few seconds, and then sighs as she opens her hand, palm up, waiting for her phone. I’m just about to hand it to her, until I got an idea.

“Hey! Aren’t you gonna give it back to me?” she asks

“Nope! Not until we get outside!” I say as I dodge her slap and jog to the other end of the room.

She smirks a little, and then walks over to me, I jog away again. You have no idea how amusing this is :P before I knew it, I was running away from her, hmm… might as well make up for the lost time. I run for the door, and enter the stairwell that leads to the street.

“Don’t forget the keys!” I shout from the stairwell, I hear her quick footsteps. And I dart out the main doors; I turn to see her standing at the top of the stairs, just glaring at me. She decided to wear high top sneakers today, that’s still cute.

“Where are you going?” she asks, giving up on pretending to be angry.

“You better hurry! I decided we should go to the mall today, I thought we should get couple rings in commemoration of our first month of dating ^^” We have a lot of stores to go to; we better hurry if we wanna go to all of them. She was frozen in place, her face now blank.

“…I don’t wanna go anymore…” she says

“WHAT?! No we have to!”

“hmm… how about YOU go, and bring one back for me :)” that logic make no sense to me… but she’s so stubbourn, how am I gonna get her to come?... oh wait,

“Well… I guess I’ll just go, with your cellphone... and … READ ALL YOUR MESSAGES!”  Her jaw dropped, and began to step down the steps, even more quickly as she reached the bottom. Haha, that got her to move. I quickly turn around and jog to the right; I don’t wanna make her run the WHOLE way… I’ll just “give up” after the next street.

I can hear her footsteps echo in the stairwell hall as I reach a few stores down, and hear them on the sidewalk too until they abruptly stopped altogether.

“Mum-“ What? I quickly turn around.

 

Gaheun’s POV:

                I run down the steps of the stairwell and make a sharp right to follow Donghae. As I turn, all the air was suddenly knocked out of me, a hand covers my mouth and I’m being dragged backwards. What? I squirm and try to kick to break free, but nothings working. I can’t help but be pulled back. Donghae notices in a split second, and turns to look at me; his face is a combination of shock, anger, and fear all combined in one.

 

 

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Author:
Hey guys! sooo... is this a twist or what?!?! Were you expecting this at all? I TRIED to sneakily add in hints in the previous chapters so it wouldn't be like a smack in the face... but i feel maybe it sorta was :P hahahha. anyways! Hope you are intrigued in what i have in store for you!

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Adoree
#1
Chapter 87: Fooobtteqafobhvdzch....

So speechless....
One of the best stories ever!

Loved both endings...
so well written :D
Beat fic omg
Sibecca407 #2
Chapter 87: so damn sweet, omg, keep up the good work & will anticipate for more stories! ^^
blazensaddles #3
Chapter 87: guess what i just did~~~~~
:3 lol i just read this again XD woot!!!! still made me cry ._.
hellokimchi
#4
AHHHHH! It ended!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congrats to a completed fic!
So I picked Epilogue 2 to read cause I can't bear sad endings. You're gonna make me cry, I know so. Props to you for being such a good writer.
OMG, I loved it! Gaheun and Donghae got married and had a kid!!! The kid was so cute thinking Appa had an imaginary friend. You lit a smile up my face. I miss the happy atmosphere, but the sad stuff really moved me.
The ending was so cute and romantic. I liked how the dialogue related back to the title. Best ultimate ending.

Please write more fics in the future. I would read anything you write.
playmirth
#5
Epilogue 2 : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!! Such a sweet ending !!!! >< I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REAAAAAALLYYYYYYY LOVE IT (copy and paste did me a lot of work :p) I cried at the beginning because I thought it was Gaheun who died ! >< Then I read..... 'him' WAIT WHAT !? 'HIM' !? Then again, I think that the sad ending is on the previous chapter. I still cried anyway, and stopped when haeeun talks to seunghyun. I know, I'm so stupid.
Then it started again when donghae played with gaheun, when he backhugs gaheun after she calls him a dinosaur ! You oughta know, you wrote it !!! XD
I mean, they really went through a lot of things to be where they are now, see ? This is sooo sweet, and what I love even more is the fact that this is sooo beautifully written ! >o< Such a refreshing leisure time after midterm ! >< YESSS, my midterm ended ! Hooray to me !!!! \(´▽`)/
Overall, I LOVE the sad ending more than the happy one ! ^o^ It gives me more impact, >< and... Well, I just like sad endings.
playmirth
#6
Epilogue 1 : I AM CRYING THE WHOLE TIME AND AM STILL CRYING WHEN WRITE THIS ! ><
You're sucha genius, unni ! >< I'm totally speechless, I can't write. *wipes tears*
Really, LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE THE SAD ENDING ! YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE SAD THINGS, RIGHT ? You have no idea how much my heart beat when I read the one where she finally says "I Love You" and the fact that she can no longer say it to him is.... Too heartbreaking ! >< And YeJin, I love her more after this. Her way of soothing donghae is.... *sigh* I can imagine the scene in my head, donghae in the cafe where the first love VCR is taken, yejin sitting on the edge of one of the table. He enters on a twilight sky surrounding the area, their faces were almost invisible, just the silhouette. :'(
And he was reading the letter with that black shirt he wore on SMA, GAHH black shirt seems so hot on donghae. And anyways ! Great job on the sad ending ! >o<
blazensaddles #7
to be honest, they both are very good. i liked both endings, and i cant really pick a favorite. i dont know if you care at all, but here are my (summarized? trying not to give a lot away) thoughts on the endings-
Epilogue 1: short, but a lot of emotion. of course im sad, but im also happy. (Gaheun and Seunghyun).
Epilogue 2: very happy :) again sad and happy. (Seunghyun and Gaheun) at least both are together. HaeEun, haha cute. Dinosaur finally comes out :D
if i were to pick one, it would be Epilogue.....2.
meowchie09
#8
i love the second epilogue.. but the first one is good too..
so sad it already ended >.< but great story :))