heaven knows i'm miserable now by samlovesbaek
Reviewer's Note:

i'm really really sorry if you find the reviews are quite harsh t_t but i really love your story as well, good luck on your story^^


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Title: 4 over 5

Your title is somehow has a taste of angsty and I really like it~ Somehow it's inspired by a song, so yeah, its kinda common tho-  but after I read your story, the title seems to be more special to me.




Poster & Background: 3 over 10

Your poster is more into colorful and bright, it's more suitable for cute romance or romcom, not angst. I suggest you to have a darker color for your poster because you're writing angst story.




Description & Foreword: 3 over 10

To be very honest, your author's note got more words than your description. It has to be the opposite. And one more thing, no one's gonna read a very long author's note. Just keep it simple for the author's note, 3-4 sentences is enough. Somehow, you can add a bit of your plot in your description, but make it cliffhanger in the end so that it'll attract the readers to click on your first chapter. And these are some errors that you had; [(