♦ Lipstick Stains (O)
♦​ LostHuman

Genre: Comedy | Drama | Fluff | Romance  
Main Characters: Luhan | YooMin | Jin | JungKook

Roses are red
Violets are blue
You really think I’d cry over you
I said I love you
You thought that was true
Well guess what player
You just got played too

Title: 5/5 

Your title is very unique! There aren't stories that had the same one! :D Congratulations. I love how you also used it in your description. 

 

Poster and Background: 9/10

Your poster and background are very pretty but I think it could be better. It screams romance and drama but not comedy and fluff. It gives off the serious vibe... or maybe that's just me... xD 

 

Description and Foreword: 8.5/10

Your description is perfect! I love it! :D I love the quote, how it was place... everything! :D But you should place any author's note after everything. And there are errors so I ducked out points.

ex. 

I'm Raven, Cupid's greatest rival, unlike Cupid who is just a figure from  Greek Mythology, I am real, I am breathing like you do, I am just like you but my heart has been shattered to pieces and it's not simply torn in two.

Should be: I'm Raven, Cupid's greatest rival. Unlike Cupid who is just a figure from Greek Mythology, I am real, I am breathing like you do; I am just like you... but my heart has been shattered to pieces and it's not simply torn in two.

which gave her another personality that very much different from her true self.

Should be: which gave her another personality that was very different from her true self. | 

"I want you to break his heart.."

Should be: "I want you to break his heart..." (Three periods. There are others like this but I won't point them out.)

 

Plot: 28/35 

I have read stories like this before... I don't remember where exactly but I have. So it's not that unique for me. 

 

Flow: 10/10.

Your flow is great :D I have nothing to say against it. 

 

Consistency: 9/10

I really like your writing style but you should fix some errors and use paragraph