♦ Three  Hundred Fifty-Six (C)
♦​ neverland

Genre: Angst | Romance
Main Characters: Kai | OC

Miyeon wrote a letter to her boyfriend, kai, for their one year anniversary to tell him all the things that she loves and hates about him. 

Title: 5/5 

Your title is very connected to the story, unique  is very eye catching!  ^^

5 points for you! :D 

 

Poster and Background: 5/10

I love your background. It so fitting! but since you don't have a poster I'll be giving you five points. 

Here are some shops that I highly recommend:

♦ IceCream Graphics 

♦ Chocolat Poster Shop

♦ Dark Heart Graphics 

 

Description and Foreword: 9.5/10

I seriously love your description and foreword! It's perfect but I think it would be better if you aligned your description to the left or center and if you would remove the last three dots.

 

Plot: 35/35 

It's my first time reading a plot like this! ^^ I really, really loved it! ^^ 

 

Flow & Consistency: 20/20.

You have a very consistent writing style and a good flow! I don't have much to say xD 

 

Readers responses: 2.5/5

This needs more responses because it's so good!

Try visiting AD shops or you could advertise this story yourself.

 

Grammar: 9.5/10

Your grammar is very good but there are mistakes here and ther