exo cracks story link | author link   review by: iamanexofan   Title: 5 over 5

Your title is unique, eye-catching and connected to the story! ^^ I love it! :D 



Poster & Background: 8 over 10 

I love your poster! It's so cute! hahaha Gosh, they look really, really funny! :D I can already tell that the story is crack just by looking at your poster ~ ^^ 

The designer did a wonderful job. You don't have a background though so I took points off. 


Description & Foreword: 9.5 over 10

Your description and foreword is pretty much perfect and I don't have any complains about that. 

Just a suggestion though... you should put the chocolat credits in the middle too. Cause it ruins the design and consistency. 


Plot: 30 over 35

This kind of chat fic is no longer unique but your scenarios were xD 



Flow & Consistency: 14 over 15

The flow is good and it could easily be followed. Your designs and writing style was also consistent! ^^ 

Just a suggestion though... Since you don't have a background, your story looks too plain (for me at least) so you should add some more colors and stuff. Maybe color blue for Kris and pink for Tao or something. The start was good and the paragraph divider added some design but when you get to the actual text itself, everything turns simple. 



Reader's response: 4.5 over 5

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