After Earth story link | Author link   review by: iamanexofan   Title: 5 over 5

I love your title! It's  very connected to the story and unique. It summarizes your whole story! :D It's also eye-catching! ^^
 
5 points for you! :) 


Poster & Background: 9.5 over 10 

Your poster is so good! It's perfectly connected to the story! :D The title could be read and the characters are recognizable. 

Your background is good to but I took a half point off because I couldn't read the rest of the quote. xD

I got the main idea and you did include it in the credits but it would be a lot better if readers could see the quote instantly. 


Description & Foreword: 9 over 10

The quote you used is wonderful.  It's so perfect ~ It describes perfectly what happened. It's even better that you included a link that will better explain the quote. 

For your foreword though, I can't help but feel that you revealed too much. Way too much. 


Plot: 30 over 35

This kind of plot is really cliche. The end of the world and not many people left on it. Fighting for survival. I've read many stories like this one so it didn't have that much impact for me. Especially since what wiped mankind was a disease. It's just so cliche (no offense.). It's not that I'm against cliche stories, hell I don't care really as long as it was written very well. Yours was but I just didn't feel it that much. 

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