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  DAILY EXO story link | Author link    review by: iamanexofan
    Title: 4.5 over 5

Your title is really unique! It's also eye-catching and it totally fits the story. I would have given you 5 points but I cant't help but feel that it's missing something.  


Poster and Background: 5 over 10 

Your poster is cute and fluffy just like what your genre says but it could be better.  The main characters is the whole group right? You should get a poster that presents EXO as a whole. Not just Kris. 

I think you should change your background too. 

Here are some shops that I highly recommend. (Click the diamonds ~) 

♦ IceCream Graphics

♦ Chocolat Poster Shop

♦ Dark Heart Graphics


Description & Foreword: 7.5 over 10 

Your description is way too long. You should just put it in the foreword (also the picture) and create a shorter version.  

It's also ve
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