Nothing more than friends story link | Author link   review by: LostHuman   Title: 4 over 5

Your title is really unique, but it gives off a cliche kind of feeling. It did not really attract my attention.  Well maybe it's just me. But just by reading the title, I felt like I'm going to read a cliche love story. 


Poster & Background: 9 over 10 

Your poster is really amazing, but I deducted a point since I can't sense the Romance genre in it. 


Description & Foreword: 7 over 10

Your description is perfect. In a sense that it can grab a readers' attention. But then, just by reading it; It gives too much information with such concise words. You deducted the thrill that should be found in the story, you indirectly revealed the twist that you planned. Yeah, the twist where Beakhyun will die in the end. And please do something about the sizes of your credits/banners used for the credits, please make them look uniform.


Plot: 30 over 35

I love your plot but then again it was not that unique to me. I have read a couple of fics that somehow relates to this plot of this story. I still commend you for writing that sad ending, and how you made Baekkie die in the end
*..yep..you did..but..why?!!! why did you let the bacon die...T______T*


Flow & Consistency: 14 over 15

I Love your story, but there's just this thing about fast paced stories that really gets me uninterested, yo