Wooyoung's guide on how to make a playboy fall for you by Bearlover
Image size: 550px w | 361 px h



Title: 3 over 5

Your title is long! The readers will find it hard to remember, which is not good, because you want the title to be remembered by readers. For me, titles should be around 3 to 5 words long, unless the title is catchy enough. I suggest you make it shorter, though this one actually already fits the story.




Poster & Background: 8 over 10

Your poster shows the playfulness of the story and the characters could be seen clearly, but the title is not readable enough because of the colour font, that's why I took a point. Another point is taken because you have no background, which might seem like it's not a big deal, but it would be more satisfying if you have one. 




Description & Foreword: 8 over 10

I love your description! I always have a soft spot for short, mysterious description and your description managed to make me wonder what's Wooyoung's going to do. Your foreword is also interesting enough especially the last dialogue! You might want to change the font though, because, I don't know, the size is too big? It makes the story less appealing in my opinion.




Plot: 30 over 35

The plot is not that unique since I've read a novel like this before, but I still love the way you delivered it, you managed to make it more interesting because your choice of words is great, enough said. The part where he denied his feelings and called Wooyoung a is pretty mainstream for me, but the plot twists are great; I totally di