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Title: 4 over 5

Not the most original title and not that alluring, but since the whole story is about Sehun looking for perfection, I think it's good already.


 Poster & Background: 5 over 10

I feel like your poster is too much. I don't see the reason why their picture line needed to be thicken. I just don't feel anything from the poster except from Kai's playful expression which fit his character well, but the colour and the theme are just off. I love the quote though.

It's okay if you don't have any background, but you might want to consider having one since it's too plain.


Description & Foreword: 8 over 10

Your description is pretty intriguing and I love short, mysterious description so I don't have much to say about it. Your foreword is nice also! I love the way you describe both Luhan and Kai. There are some mistakes though:

Luhan has a pale, white and milky white skin while Kai's tanned.
Luhan has a small, frail, hugable body while Kai's size is almost as big as Sehun's.
Luhan is elegant and well educated, while Kai loves to play around.
Luhan gives his best to pleases Sehun, while Kai doesn't even give a damn about the other.
Should be:
Luhan has a pale,  milky white skin while Kai's tanned.
Luhan has a small, frail, huggable body while Kai's size is almost as big as Sehun's.
Luhan is elegant and well educated, while Kai loves to play around.
Luhan gives his best to please Sehun, while Kai doesn't even give a damn about the other.

Other than that, I th