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Howl
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Review by: Exoticmermaid
Title: 5 over 5
When I read your title I remembered the animation Howl’s Moving Castle…which I good, since it’s one of my favourite animation. It’s perfectly fit the story, since it’s wolf! Au and, well, I love short and simple title−it’s catchy.
Poster & Background: 9 over 10
Both fit the story well, because of the dark theme; they just simply scream supernatural and action. I don’t really see the romance, but it’s still really good.
And I love your current poster more than the others *wink*.
Description & Foreword: 8 over 10
I love the description, but there’s something odd in this sentence:
After being kicked out by her wicked Aunt, and learning of the existence of a brother she didn’t know she had, things keep getting stranger still.
I think it should be:
After being kicked out by her wicked aunt and learning about the existence of a brother she didn’t know she had, things keep getting stranger.
I love the way you put the song list to set the mood. The song lyrics you put on the foreword is like a teaser; it caught my attention even though I don’t know the song, you know, like sending a vibe and giving the urge to read it.’
Plot: 30 over 35
Definitely not the most original one since wolf!au fic with EXO as the main character is spreading like a disease, but when I read chapter 4,
When I read your title I remembered the animation Howl’s Moving Castle…which I good, since it’s one of my favourite animation. It’s perfectly fit the story, since it’s wolf! Au and, well, I love short and simple title−it’s catchy.
Poster & Background: 9 over 10
Both fit the story well, because of the dark theme; they just simply scream supernatural and action. I don’t really see the romance, but it’s still really good.
And I love your current poster more than the others *wink*.
Description & Foreword: 8 over 10
I love the description, but there’s something odd in this sentence:
After being kicked out by her wicked Aunt, and learning of the existence of a brother she didn’t know she had, things keep getting stranger still.
I think it should be:
After being kicked out by her wicked aunt and learning about the existence of a brother she didn’t know she had, things keep getting stranger.
I love the way you put the song list to set the mood. The song lyrics you put on the foreword is like a teaser; it caught my attention even though I don’t know the song, you know, like sending a vibe and giving the urge to read it.’
Plot: 30 over 35
Definitely not the most original one since wolf!au fic with EXO as the main character is spreading like a disease, but when I read chapter 4,
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