Forever with you by Bapisperfect
Image size: 550px w | 361 px h



Title: 3 over 5

Your title, although directly connected to the story, is very common. Thousand stories showed up when I searched for it. It's good that you're title is relatable to the story but it's not so when many others have the same title as you do. Readers will think that your story is the same as other ones and won't even bother to check it out. It' not that catchy as well. Perhaps because it was too common.

Short + Interesting + Unique = Best title there is.




Poster & Background: 10 over 10

I LOVE your poster!! It's the perfect blend of tragedy, angst and drama! It' gorgeous ~ It truly is! The designer did a great job in bring out your story with the poster! Your background isn't eye-catching too! ^ 

10 points for you ~




Description & Foreword: 8 over 10

Your description is perfect! It caught my attention the first moment that I read it! But since I knew what was already going to happen, it was kind of a turn off. 

I suggest moving the better half of the description to the foreword. It looks too empty for me. Also, maybe you could make the font larger and clearer? It's too graying so it's a bit hard to read. But aside from that, everything about it is perfect.




Plot: 30 over 35

Your plot isn't really that unique. I've read other stories with a similar plot line just like yours but it's not exactly common either! ^^ 




Flow & Consistency: 15 over 15

Your writing style is consistent as well as your font. Good job! ^^ Your flow is perfect as well!

I'm sorry but I just can'