The Story of a Not-so-romantic girl story link | author link   review by: Iamanexofan   Title: 5 over 5

Your title is very unique! It's eye catching and it's also connected to the story! ^^ It gives of the rom-com vibe :D 



Poster & Background: 0 over 10 

It would be better if you have a poster and a background. Those things affects just how much a reader will like your story. I would suggest some but the shops that I like are all closed. 



Description & Foreword: 6 over 10

Your description and foreword looks way too plain. You should add more color to it and give your story some life because you don't have a background and a poster. 

I think that your description is too long. It would be better if you were to have a short and eye-catching one. 

Your foreword is okay... I guess but like I said, it's too plain for me.

For the EXO characters, it would be better if you seperate their pictures and introduce them individually. 

The descriptions need periods too.



Plot: 25 over 35

This kind of plot is really no longer unique but since this is just the start, there will be plenty of time to add more twists. 



Flow & Consistency: 14 over 15

The flow is good and it could easily be followed! :D I'm confused about your paragraph spacing though. Sometimes it's too big and sometimes it's not... 

If the scene changes I sugge