Underwear Thief story link | Author Link   Review by: Exoticmermaid   Title: 5 over 5

Since I’m into comedy, your title is interesting enough for me. I just suddenly knew that the story is going to be funny. And the title is not mainstream, so good job on that! 


Poster & Background: 8 over 10 

They’re both so playful! I don’t know what the relevance between underwear and cats is, but since I’m a er for kitties in pastel colour, I'll let it pass. Besides, it’s still funny and not distracting readers from reading. 


Description & Foreword: 7 over 10

Though I like the short and mysterious description, you have grammatical mistakes there!

It should be:

Undies have gone missing.

I love how the foreword urged me to read more; the way you use the word ‘extinct’ made me think ‘whoa, the thief is crazy enough to steal that much of underwear.’


Plot: 28 over 35

It’s so funny! I smiled all the time when I read it. It’s pretty unique in my opinion, though there are a lot of stories with this kind of plot. 


Flow & Consistency: 10 over 15

You should divide dialogues into paragraphs so it would be easier to read instead of putting it in the same paragraph. Your font is also not consistent; sometimes it’s too big like in chapter 5.

The last few chapters confused me a lot, so it ruined the flow. Chapter 7 was about Youngjae and Zelo hanging out