♦ Sasaeng's Pen (O)
♦​ cuteismysterious

Genre: Fluff
Main Characters: Yong Jinkyu | Baekhyun (EXO) | Sasaeng Fans | Various Korean Idols

People always talk about us negatively. They don't even know us to begin with.​

Title: 5/5 

Your title is very connected to the story and it's very unique! It's very eye catching too 5 points for you! ^^ 

 

Poster and Background: 4/10

No offense but I don't really like your poster and background... It's too dark and stuff. You said that the genre of this story is fluff. Your poster doesn't give off that vibe at all. 

It screams angst and drama but since your story does seem like it's more of drama rather than fluff, maybe you could just change the genre. 

But I still suggest changing the poster and background. 

Here are some shops that I highly recommend 

♦ IceCream Graphics 

♦ Chocolat Poster Shop

♦ Dark Heart Graphics 

 

Description and Foreword: 7/10

You should put your description in your foreword... It's too long. You should just use the one that you entered in my form. 

The font color is just a suggestion! ^^ 

People always talk about us negatively. They don't even know us to begin with.​ 

 

Plot: 33/35 

Your plot seems interesting! ^^ This is my first time seeing a story where a sasaeng fan is a main character... I would lie t