® — Crimson Nightingale

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♦ Crimson Nightingale (O)
♦​ ForeverRainbow

Genre: Angst | Comedy | Fantasy | Friendship | Romance 
Main Characters: Kyungsoo | Jin Hee

"Can you be my nightingale?"

She's always been unwanted.

She's always been the failure.

So that's how she's been living: an unwanted failure. 

When life casually throws in challenge after challenge, what is one unwanted failure supposed to do? 

She didn't know, but one thing was for sure, she wasn't supposed to be someone's pawn. 

Title: 4.5/5 

Your title is very unique! :D It's also related to the story. I like how it sounds but it seems like their story is horror or something. Crimson is a deep red and we tend to associate red with blood.

Or maybe I'm just over thinking? xD

 

Poster and Background: 9.5/10

I love your poster!! It screams angst, romance and drama! Its perfect! ^^ 

Your dark red background is awesome too but flowers with hearts in the middle didn't seem fitting. Maybe you could put something with birds in it... since a nightingale is a bird. 

 

Description and Foreword: 8.5/10

I love your description and foreword but if you're changing the font color to a dark red then stick to dark red. You should enlarge your font size too... It's way too small. The font size in your description is good, size that font size for the whole story.. The foreword's too small. 

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