The Grandmaster story link | Author Link   Review by: IAmanexofan   Title: 4 over 5

I love your title! :D It's short unique and catchy ~ 

It also appeared in the story itself so that part was cool but Grandmaster should be spelled as 'Grand master' 


Poster & Background: 5.5 over 10 

The poster is cool but it doesn't scream fantasy at all. To be honest, I thought that your story was crime, angst and drama. 

The poster is way too dark, giving off the angst feeling. Their faces are so serious too so it added more angst and drama. Even the text itself is dark.

The characters are recognizable and the title is readable though. :D

Like your poster, your background is too dark. I'm seriously getting an angst vibe from it. 

You said that this story's genre is fantasy (based on the form.) but I think it's somewhat science-fiction and action too. 

That's just a suggestion! ^^ I also suggest getting a new poster and background. A more fantasy-like one since it's your story's genre. 


Description & Foreword: 4.5 over 10

The font style is consistent and the size is readable but it's just too plain. I would also like to revise something. 

Original text: (It's in italics to avoid confusion.) 

Everyday, they walk the same path as we walk

Everyday, they talk the same language that we use

Everyday, they breath the same air as us 

But

They have something that we don't have

They use something that we can't imagine to have

They can do anything

And

They already live among us for centuries

They are The Grandmaster

​Revised version: (In italics to avoid confu