® — The Vampire Who Cried Wolf
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✏ The Vampire Who Cried Wolf
Title: 5 over 5
I love your title! :D It's awesome. Seriously. It's unique and eye catching! I love how you played with the title 'The Boy Who Cried Wolf'. It's really, really cute. It's also connected to the story! :D
I don't know about what others think but I think your title is perfect. That's my personal opinion though xD.
Poster & Background: 4.5 over 10
I'm in love with your poster <3. It's so pretty. I especially love the picture of the howling wolf. I don't like one thing though. Why is Luhan's eyes closed? xD It would have looked better if they were open. But aside from that, it's perfect.
Why the low grade? You don't have a background. As much as I like your poster, a background is also important. You should get one right away.
Description & Foreword: 6.5 over 10
Your description isn't really that interesting. It made it obvious that your story is cliche.
As for your foreword, I have nothing to say against it but you should separate 'werewolves' from 'Blood Vampires'. Also, you should increase the font size of 'Vampires' and 'Werewolves' so that they are more obvious.
Plot: 28 over 35
Your story is very cliche. I mean, seriously, a
Title: 5 over 5
I love your title! :D It's awesome. Seriously. It's unique and eye catching! I love how you played with the title 'The Boy Who Cried Wolf'. It's really, really cute. It's also connected to the story! :D
I don't know about what others think but I think your title is perfect. That's my personal opinion though xD.
Poster & Background: 4.5 over 10
I'm in love with your poster <3. It's so pretty. I especially love the picture of the howling wolf. I don't like one thing though. Why is Luhan's eyes closed? xD It would have looked better if they were open. But aside from that, it's perfect.
Why the low grade? You don't have a background. As much as I like your poster, a background is also important. You should get one right away.
Description & Foreword: 6.5 over 10
Your description isn't really that interesting. It made it obvious that your story is cliche.
As for your foreword, I have nothing to say against it but you should separate 'werewolves' from 'Blood Vampires'. Also, you should increase the font size of 'Vampires' and 'Werewolves' so that they are more obvious.
Plot: 28 over 35
Your story is very cliche. I mean, seriously, a
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