Story Title : sLICE OF HEAVEN
Author:  allyouneedislove
Reviewer: TangledLove

Title (10/10)
The title is unique and it expresses the story literally. From the beginning to the end, the story connects to the story well.  it sets the mood for some angsty love and it connects with kyungsoo's character in the most perfect way possible. the title is just excellent. 


Story descripton (10/10) 
I think it's hard to write good description and foreword because it's so important to do it well that it kind of leads to the fate of your story. And I really love your story's description. It immediately drew me in when I first read it.  I like the cleanliness of your foreword and how it's not so cluttered that I can't understand it. It's easy to make out which belongs where, etc. 


OVerall appearance (4/5) 
I LOVE YOU POSTER BUT IT SHOULD be a little more angst poster than this in my opinion.   Other than that, everything looks neat and organized. 

plot (24/25) 
I completed love this story's plot! Especially that ending! It's so much more meaningful and memorable, I can't seems to stop reading those few paragraph of the lines to absorbed the ending well. I love it when I can't predict the ending. Also Your plot is well-developed, and you have a good mood going on.  However, W