Batch Two Review Sorry For Being Such An Inconvenience by NotSoGwiyomi
Story Title: Sorry For Being Such An Inconvenience
Author: NotSoGwiyomi
Summary: Key's involved in an accident that leaves him mentally disabled. One day after pushing it too far, his mother sends him to an institute to help him get better. During his stay he makes friends. Some good, and some bad. But as time goes on he realizes be isn't the only one messed up.
Reviewer: TangledLove
Story Title : (7/10)
The title doesn't grip my attention since it sounds so simple like a phrase. I can't really find meanings behind it. But it sounds sad because of the way the word are being put, so I must credit you for using the tile for the storyline and it does fit the story.
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Foreword and Description: (6/10)
I love the introduction since the presentation is nicely done. After the introduction, you give us kind
of a sneak peek that throws me off. Mainly because of my mental illness, but also because it enabled me from doing anything. You kind of give us a whole storyline right there. You should make it mysterious and let them find out
what's wrong with Key even though some readers can guess it.
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