Batch Three Review
Thrown Aside by LilTibbers

Story Title: Thrown Aside

Author: LilTibbers

Story Sumarry:
A relationship between a dog and his master, written in dog's POV 

Reviewer: Baozi12

 

 

Title (9/10)
The title doesn't grip my attention since it's simple but it gives out angst vibe. In relation to the story, it does link to the plotline. 

 

 

Foreword and Description (8/10)

The description and foreword are well done but it doesn't wow or attract the readers.

 

Characterization(10/10)

I have nothing to say here. The characters are not cliche or mary sue and you did protray them well. 

 

Plot / Storyline (25/25)
I love those pet stories. It's just amazing and it leave an impact on the readers. The plot is quite amazing. Even though it's really short one shot but I could see how the readers love it. 

 

 

Flow  (8/10)
The first paragraphs are kind of rushed. Other than that, it was fine. It would be better if you explained how they met and a little bit of their happiness through the time that they spent together. 

Still it's perfect. 

 

 

Appearance (10/10)

The poster is perfect. The layout, fonts, and everything is A okay. 

 

 

 

Grammar (30/30)
Your writing style is perfect and there were no abso