Batch One Review
Crème de la Crème by FlyingMay Story Title: Crème de la Crème
  Author: FlyingMay

Reviewer: TangledLove

Story Title : (8/10)
It's not that attractive and interesting as it sounds. I wouldn't click on the title if I see it.  "Blinded by Perfection" would make a better title in my opinion. However, the title contradicts the meaning of the story and makes the ending unexpected.

Foreward and Description: (8/10) 
It was simple and yet looks interesting. It's a good thing that you don't put characters' chart since Sehun's character change along the story. But you should state what classes they are in and what social status they have in the foreward. 
You need some pictures and quotes to attract more readers. 


Characterization: (9/10) Since the story is more revolved around Ella and her love life and you are making it three different stories, I guess it's okay not to talk about Sehun and Minyoung's feelings that much. 
But since Sehun is the main characters who ended up with Ella in the end, it would be better to put his feelings more. 

PLot/ StoryLine: (20/25)
I am not sure I am reading drama or real life story. When you write based on real-life story, don't put too much drama since it can make it unrealistic. I still can't believe that you are that into your crush LOL XD 
I never expect that Miyoung nevers understand her best friend's feelings when Sehun can understand it. That makes it a little cliche since you know. A lot of stories has those