Batch Four  Wizard & Wolves by Rogue-Renegade

Title (4/10)
Your title was simple, but not exactly creative.Your title is pretty cliché. It's just your story's foundation. There wasn't anything really hidden in this story.

Foreword/ Description (4/10) 
Your description was okay and I don't really have nothing to say. Nothing caught my eye, it wasn't anything special. If I was looking at this story and I wasn't a reviewer, personally I would be bored and probably be looking for some spice and jazz in the foreword. Instead of giving us the piece of the story, I would recommend summarize the story and spice things up to hook the readers. 

Characterization (5/10)
They aren't concrete. They don't have personality traits that make me go "Yup that is something she/he would totally say." or if they did something I'll be like you totally would do that. They're flimsy and seem like characters that just go with the flow and their personalities flucuate to the point where its not character developement. I didn't feel th