Batch Four  말하지 못한 질투 — Unspoken Jealousy by ENTertainment_

Title (9/10)
I really like your title, it's short and quick to the topic, and it's really eye-catching. I highly doubt this is a cliché title, mainly because I don't see much titles in this community with the same title. It's really unique and I enjoyed it quite a bit. Something else I really liked is that it didn't give too much information, or too little information. I alos don't think you need the Korean words in the title. It made the title look awkward. 

Foreword/ Description (8/10) 
I think you did very well in drawing attention to your story through your concise description of the story. When I read the introduction, it sounded cliche but the way you wrote it was interesting and it attracts attention. As mentioned, I love how you're very concise with your words and kept it short and simple. Just remember to capitalize the words when you start the sentence. (or is just because of the layout?)

Characterization (9/10)
I feel like there are some holes you didn't fill in your character section,They feel quite lifeless because