Batch Four  Rain 

Title (3/10)
The title seem dull and it's overused title. I don’t think it’s very unique though. To me, the title lacked a lot of Wow factor in terms of attracting readers. I haven’t seen the full relation between the title and the plot but I guess it's like that since there is only one chapter and prologue.

Foreword/ Description (10/10) 
As soon as I read the foreword and description, I was instantly hooked. I love how you made the foreword very general and brief, while the description got more into detail. You didn't reveal too much of the plot, only the basics, just enough to hook someone in. 

Characterization (9/10)
I couldn't judge this part since I couldn't relate to the characters as you are on only one chapter one. 

Plot/Storyline (23/25)
Woah, such a chilling story so far! I liked the way you started the story off with prologues to get plot going. This story was amazing and somewhat original but I f