Batch Four  A year Holiday by wuyifan95

Title (4/10)
 It's a simple tittle. Nice but not catchy. Also when I read the description, I felt that the story and title doesn't relate in any ways. I felt that "The  Star" Title would be better for the story.I gave you some points for origniality and uniqueness, I've never seen that title before with EXO stories.

Foreword/ Description (7/10) 
thought it was a good description. Though I thought it was lacking a little, I don't have many complaints. I like it when you give us a piece of the story, it makes me interested. I  don't get why you put the posters in description when you credit them in the foreword. 

Characterization (9/10)
In my opinion, I think you somewhat nailed the characterization. It's hard to introduce all the characters but you did great. They all had problems, which made them  realistic. But I think you can do better in this part, expressing the main character's emotions a bit more. 

Plot/Story