Batch One Review Impossibly Possibel by tohosyinki
Story Title: Impossibly Possible
Author: tohosyinki
Reviewer: TangledLove
Story Title : (7/10)
It's not that attractvie and it looks ordinary.It doesn't make me click when I just read the title but the title matches with the storyline and I cannot think of better titles.
ForeWard and Description: (10/10)
You did good while you are expressing Baekhyun's feeling in the foreward and I want to read more.
It's simple but not that attractive.
Characterization: (10/10)
I like the characters. Baekhyun and Chanyeol characterizations have flaws and not perfect. It looks realistic. I never read those storylines before but I once read "The Fault in our stars" , so I have been in their shoes.
PLot/ StoryLine: (20/25)
Since I never read those storylines before in the AFF before, I was amazed to read the story. I have found the story that is too not depressing when the characters are disbaled. It's sweet and to be honest, I really like it. It's just that I don't really like the fact that they become friend and make it to another level in the short time.
Story Flow: (7/10)
The flow is kind of rush and the use of words and the repetitions kind of ruin it.
Appearance (9/10)
The poster and the type of fonts match the story but use some some color to make it more interesting in the foreward.
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