Story Title : WE GOT A BABY!
Author:  Saki1017
Reviewer: TangledLove

Title (7/10)
YOUR TITLE IS REALLY RELEVANT TO THE STORY. I LOVE HOW IT  SPEAKS THE MAIN IDEA OF THE STORY.  THE ONLY THING THAT I DON'T LIKE ABOUT YOUR TITLE IS THAT IT'S REALLY CLICHÉ and it was too direct and simple and hence making it hard to find your story.  Also it was misleading because most of the stories where the girl got pregnant due to one night stand have the same title.  And I don't think you need to capitalize all the words because it make it unprofessional. 


Story descripton (9/10) 
Great foreword! It's simple but reveals a lot of the story's main plot to the readers instead of forcing them to look through the first chapter to find out what the summary is. So far, this is a great way to start the story and get it going. Great job creating a bridge into the story without the use of an excerpt. But I don't think you need the characters description since you introduced them in the story. 


OVerall appearance (5/5) 
The story's overall appearance was great. It's clean and it gives off romcom feelings. 


plot (18/25) 
Your plot is quite wide-spread, there is no plot line, it's like an infinitely repeating plot line. I really wish it followed the freitag curve, such as, exposition, inciting accident, rising action, , falling action, and resolution. There has to be something that shows a plot line in your story. It isn