Batch Three Review
 A Bittersweet Melody by kaepie

Story Title: A Bittersweet Melody

Author: kaepie

Story Summary:
"Right now, there are only happy stories here

The very happy stories of just the two of us (Different from reality)

Is written here, it’s slowly filling up"

A happy reality and a happy fantasy- just how clear is the line that tells them apart?

A memory that drags on forever, stays in your heart for a lifetime even though your partner is long gone- in the midsts of the mirthful lyrics.

Reviewer: TangledLove

 

Title (6/10)

Your title is really  cliché. There are a lot of titles that can fit based on the storyline. Just use your creativity. your title is just so overused that it's not even interesting anymore. Still it'