Batch Four  Dirty Beat by RedFeather

Title (10/10)
Amazing! That was what I thought when I saw this title. Automatically I was captivated by it. Just the simple phrasing of it and it grabbed my attention. Even though

Foreword/ Description (10/10) 
Do I just give you another full score? Yes, I did. Even though I have read a lot of stories, this is the most awesome description. Kind of sound cliche at first with the toy and falling in love, your choice of words catch me and pull me into your story. 

Characterization (8/10)
In my opinion, you did a quite wonderful job with characterization. Though in the beginning it felt a little flat I thought that all of them worked perfectly together. I found them all to be realistic.I thought it was great. The development was good as well.

Plot/Storyline (22/25)
There are a lot of stories with this kind of theme. Your foundation plotline itself is quite basic and cliche. However, you b