Batch Four  The Shorter End of the Cane by Feebear88

Title (7/10)
In terms of length, the title was long.  I was a bit iffy about the title at first, but after really getting into the story, I thought it fit perfectly. The title is very original.

Foreword/ Description (8/10) 
I am not taking points off for wrong placement for poster. It shouldn't be in foreword. The description is short and goes straight to the point, without revealing too much of it. 
However, I did not understand the last sentence. 

Original : And that was exactly what Chanyeol’s heart from Baekhyun.
I guess you meant "And that was exactly what Chanyeol's heart felt from Baekhyun."

Characterization (8/10)
I like what I have read so far in terms of characterization yet I do feel like you could spend a bit more time developing your characters.! I find your characters to have a very consistent feeling to them, which is a good thing.

Plot/Storyline (23/25)
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