Story Title : Little Pup
Author:  bubbleteacups
Reviewer: TangledLove

Title (7/10)
The title is very simple but it lacks creativity and not eye-catching at all. However, It's very relevant to the story.

Story descripton (9/10) 
Your description didn’t strike me as fascinating but it had the gist of your story and a glimpse of the conflict. It provides me just enough information to satisfy my curiousity, but it was kind of give away the story and sounds cliche as the Kai is  likely to fall in love with kris. 

OVerall appearance (3/5) 
 I wasn't super impressed by the appearance, but it's not bad either. I don't find the poster very appealing. It doesn't convey much of the story to me.

plot (21/25) 
 Eh, not very original I'd say. There are a lot of stories similar to this. But you did an amazing job with the plot because you set it up in a way that would make people think "This is kind of cliché" but then you add some twists and turns that changes your story and makes it different. The plot is quite unique.

 Grammar and Writing style (22/25)
Love that your vocabulary is quite expansive and you are very descriptive with every single scene. but work a little more on conveying more emotions!  Keep it in mind though. You drag your sentences out too long sometimes. You insert to many commas and the sentences grow to be unbearably choppy, but that's only from time to time. There aren't a lot of misspelled w