Batch Four  Runaway by whiteknight

Title (6/10)
I really do like your title due to the obvious and important connection it has to your actual story. However, it’s too common and not very eye-catching.  It’s somewhat bland too. You should try to play around with words next time

Foreword/ Description (9/10) 
The description was really good, but not perfect. It does hook me into the story even though you only wrote the quotes of the characters. I actually think it fits perfectly.

Characterization (8/10)
I think the characters are great, you stick with their real personality but you could do more description about their feelings and emotions and such. Sometimes character motivations were a bit confusing, I think you did a really great job with describing everyone!

Plot/Storyline (22/25)
I think you have a really interesting plotline going on here. Even if I have read something similar to this, I have to say that the way you portr