Batch Two Review
I Must Be Going Crazy! by Kpop_Eonni Story Title: I Must Be Going Crazy!   Author:  Kpop_Eonni   Summary: 
Friends since they were just kids, Se Hun hopelessly falls in love with his best friend, Fei, a high-maintenance, drama queen from of the richest families in all of Seoul. But something unexpected happens one day that turns their relationship around for the worst. Will Se Hun ever find that something...that someone to help him love again? Will he ever find his reason to smile everyday?


Reviewer:  TangledLove
Story Title : (6/10) 
I never see this kind of title. It is not  eye catching and it doesn't grip my attention at all. I know this is your first time writing and there are a lot rooms for you to improve. A title should be interesting and relate to your story in a way. Readers won't bother to click on the title if they are not catchy. So seduce the readers by using an interesting title.    -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Foreword and Description: (5/10) 
I am not a fan of the characters' charts because sometimes they can give out the story line. There are no descriptions for the story, so it doesn't give a clue what is the story about to the readers. You could've done better. Explain what is the story about in short paragraphs and list out the characters.  Also it doesn't look catchy. Some readers won't keep going if the descriptions are not interesting.    -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Characterization: (5/10)
I don't understand Sehun's personality. I feel like he is acting cold toward Feifei. He should at least act nice and kind toward her at least
because she is his girlfriend. And Feifie is too perfect which makes her mary sue while Luhan is too cliche. He is poor, getting abused, and has
dysfunctional family. If he has dysfunctional family, you need to reveal his thoughts, what has happened, and his feelings more. So your characterizations are perfect which means you need to work on more to make it realistic.    ---