Batch Four  Beautiful Dream by Saki1017

Title (10/10)
This title fit so perfectly for the story I just love it.  I can't even express in words how well it fits, which is really something hard to accomplish. Aesthetically it's great, which is a plus, it's not long, and its just perfect. 

Foreword/ Description (9/10) 
The description is really short but catchy at the same time. With that, you have made the reader mysterious and ambiguous to invite to turn to the first chapter.

Characterization (8/10)
I liked how you made the characters the way they are. You bring out the characters and that really makes the story stand out. There isn’t the plain and boring stereotype which makes the reader pleased with what they’re reading. Still I see rooms of improvment for character development. Some scene just lack proper description or emotion. 

Plot/Storyline (22/25)
I honestly don't recall ever reading a fic just like this one, though I was wowed but any sort of twi