Batch Four  1개의 춤 (One Dance) by YuukiHikari

Title (8/10)
I just think it's awkward, to have another language in the title. However, it is original and has a strong relationship to the story. It was memorable, easy to remember and catchy as well.

Foreword/ Description (10/10) 
I think it's hard to write good description and foreword because it's so important to do it well that it kind of leads to the fate of your story but your description is clear enough for me to understand what the story is going to be about. I like how it has that mysterious feel to it. It gives us an idea of what is going to happen in the story but it also doesn't tell us exactly what is going to happen, so amazing job! 

Characterization (8/10)
You have done quite well with creating your characters. Though I wish we could get a more indepth view on what went on in their heads and perhaps there could have been something more to each character, such as: a unique quirk or habit, a more detailed background story, or something to make the more i