Close Your Eyes by sushi-mushi

Title (9/10)
First glance, I thought the title was way too typical and boring. However, after understanding the story more and better, I realized that it's a prefect fit for the story and it actually suits the theme of the story. However, the title isn't original because there are so many other fanfics with the same title.

Foreword/ Description (9/10) 
I have no problems with the description and foreword personally, they're wonderfully written. It gives us lots of hints about what the plot and theme is without telling us everything. However, it was kind of vague and sounds cliche as you introduced the characters' personalities.

Characterization (10/10)
The characterization was the strongest point of your story. You managed to convey most of the character's characteristics to the readers. Main characters have detailed and expressive characterizations,

Plot/Storyline (23/25)
The plot is simple - yet not simple. I don't know if I'm describin